WOW! loved this oneshot, you are a wicked writer totally loved the sex scene, VERY HOT! well done :)

I like this one a lot :) Would love to read more about them!

I don't have your taste in music, but i definitly like this story. So HOT! And what a great ending! Would love to read more.

Wow o.o... that was different... and very, very hot. I really liked this oneshot actually. It was definately unique. I haven't seen many Dom/sub relationships on fictionpress. Please keep writing.

Normally I don't like beardy men...but I think I can make an exception for Patto :3 I loved this. Lots. And I'm rather fond of that description of industrial dancing. 'bout sums it up. XD This was quite cute in a highly emotional and dramatic way...in other words, the perfect kind of cute! And I liked the happy ending. Well, I just liked everything! :D

I loved this. But out of anything, where did you hear of industrial dance? That shocked the shit out of me, cause it's so underground here, and now I just read a fiction that has it.

Fucking amazing.

I really liked this one! You are a very good write, and my favorite part was the end. Not the slight angst of Patto going to leave, but the 'one life stand' line by Jesse. That was a very good, almost cute, touch. As for seeing more of them, I wouldn't mind at all!

Keep On Writing!

~The-Camster

Ah i liked this! I hope you do use these characters again, because i certainly liked them. & kudos on all the awesome song refs, good taste :P