aww cute and i liked how you tied in Bet You Can't with ths story. I loved it , write more soon please

I litterally squeeled When I read the Kyrian part. Skylar said, "Ky?" and I'm like, "OMG! COULD IT BE? It IS a coffee shop!" And then he called him Kyrian and I'm like, "Okay, okay. Calm down! She just got inspiration from another one of her stories! It's not the the same thing!" And then Aria came and I died on the floor of my bedroom. :D

I like the overlap. It's always fun to see 'old friends' from other stories.

Oh. Man. Wow. So. Cute. Can. Only. Speak. One. Word. At. A. Time. Cuteness. Overload.

ahhahahahahahaha [:[:[:

aww that was so cute! And it was like a fairytale, I wish my life was that cheery!

I just reread this, and completely enjoyed it again. I wish you would do a sequel or something... that would rock. I love these characters. They're so hilarious and cute!

HI :D Reading this for the third time?

LOL. Anyway, I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT :)

Emily's so cute ;) Couldn't help smiling when she said her first words and Delta's and Skyler's shocked reactions.

Love the flow of the story, portrayal of Delta's and Skyler's character

LOL naww, i love this! i hope you have another story which has both of them in it again!

Nice one!

I love it..totally sweet..

I just clicked on the little review button expecting it to say something along the lines of "Oops, you've already reviewed this chapter" or whatever that little notice usually says. I totally could've sworn I've reviewed this before! I've read it quite a few times, and now I feel mean for not even acknowledging it.

This is one of my favourite one-shots ever. Seriously. It's so happy and fluffy, but not overly sappy (or at all, really...which is good). I absolutely LOVE the characters. A lot of people try to make their female lead crazy and funny and wild and so in your face, that they just make her incredibly annoying and by the end of the story I want to stab her with a spork. But Delta is awesome. She's got one of those unique personalities,and she is semi-crazy, but it's actually believable.

If you were thinking of extending any of your one-shots, please make it this one! Even though it's a relatively short story, the characters you've created are already so lovable. Even Chastity, who I didn't like so much at the start with the whole 'abandoning baby' thing.

Okay, this is getting a bit long. Time to cut it short.

- steph

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Very cute, I love Sky. I like the idea of having a staring contest with the baby a lot, and also the title. Cool!

Ri

Ahh, I LOVE this! I've read it so many times on my mobile, but this is the first time I've been able to read it on the laptop lol.

This is absolutely amuzzling!

XD

Lyra

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I loved it! I think you did a great job with the characters and with wrapping up the whole story.

that was so so so cute!