Reviews for I am done
Kalista Jia chapter 11 . 4/19/2009
How this story sure is read fast because of the way you posted it. Some people might find the format annoying but I dont mind.

sad story. Then again, I enjoy sad stories better. They tend to stay in my mind longer than just any happy ending.
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
very mysterious start. "I am done" I wonder what is it that he is done with.

I already like the eeriness of this chapter. I like how you described the reflection. Certainly it's intriguing.
Disabled Account sdf chapter 11 . 4/12/2009
All right, this was a very touching, wonderful and sad tale.

I love how you use the short chapters to make the story more compelling!
J. F. Landshoft chapter 11 . 4/11/2009
My my, someone's certainly a busy bee! And here I was expecting some of the fun off-the-cuff laughs that you normally deliver, and was slapped in the face by the apparently no-longer-living little girl. That -hurt-.

Although in fairness, I should've looked at the genre before I assumed.

All that emotional shizwhizzle aside, it was really quite touching, and very very good! But plase, give me some more laughs - I feel drained now lol. Off for some ridiculously good fun (woo for the six-string :P)

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