|Reviews for Going Down|
| Thornprick chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
it's funny too, i don't know why...i just laugh when i read it
| black.magic89 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
very nice:) I liked the line "besides falling. (falling.) down?" best of all! Your punctuation truly adds to the effect it has! Good job:)
| ClosetPianist1 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
lovely! really emotional and nice, the last lines are my favorite ] good job!
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
That was cool, I especially like it :P
keep it up :)
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
"I am going up,
but going down,
all at the same time."
I loved that part, nice wordplay there! I really liked it alot!
| haveyouseenmyhaggis chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
That was really stirring. It was a really nicely written piece and it flowed really nicely.
Very well done and thank you for sharing that.