|Reviews for I Don't Want Her To Be My Fan|
| FaithMemory chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
First, is this story should be on the 'romance' category? I suggest you post it to the 'manga' section. Since, I have a feeling that this story is a manga or something.
Second, try brushing up your grammars. I myself, have same mistakes like this. Like, describing something indirectly or something. Also, I found some really 'obvious' mistakes like Aya-chan saying “Forgot what I said.” to Shoichi, I think it should be "Forget what I said.."?
Anyway, I like the story.. and yes, need more descriptions so that we readers may picture everything clearly on our minds.
Keep on writing!
"There is always a space for improvement!"