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BlorangeForever chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I really like this. I noticed a couple of technical mistakes but the writing is evocative and eloquent.


"that sometimes we are patient / but we think much too much / all the love that we have / we do not give enough"

"i'm a hermit on the inside / except with softer hands"

"i'm with you when you're eyes close / i'm the thoughts behind your stare"