Reviews for did you know redemption could taste so bitter?
diffident chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I'm not usually one for formatting but in this piece, your use of it was really effective and didn't detract from it at all. I love the message and you portrayed it very well, but I feel like the second stanza is kind of weak. Other than that, excellent poem.

lymli chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
we long for the highest regards

and can't find the time of day

to give our solace to others.

I like that part.