erica really lost her memories... this is so sad...

seb will have to try harder to win her heart again...

You are pure evil... I should beat you for doing that to poor Sebastian...

those are evil chuckles that was not right ending it like that now i wont know what happens till monday! sniffle it makes me sad!

Gah! poor guy. now she doesnt remember anything. whats he to do now.

*jaw drops*

i hate you yet love at the same time right now... poor Sebastian, your so mean to him lol and if your still taking opinions, Wednesday is always good :) love it can't wait for more!

mistakes:

dialled his cousin - dialed

that the didn’t use the gentlest methods - that they

centre of the open space - center (but centre may be how you want it)

breathing had becoming raspy - become

watched them worked - work

Oh no, she now has amnesia from hitting her head. Hopefully this is just temporary. But they are finally safe at the estate, just need time to heal now.

why thats sad she dont know him

Dun Dun DUN! They just never get a break do they? I'll be waiting for mondays bit (...excitedly too!)

MJ

:] great update! :D though I feel sad for sebastian, but it makes a great story and means he has to try harder :)

I was wondering how you were going to make the story last a little longer...

You are more than mean. That's just... just.. evil! Grr! It's one thing after another isn't it? Poor Sebastian. If he doesn't get a break soon, he may end up in a padded room. I know I would!

oh my god! what a twist:) monday better come soon.

No! haha

I eagerly await the next chapter :)

Memory loss. You are so mean.

that is so mean to leave us on a huge cliffhanger like that. oh well i hope your volunteer work goes okay