Reviews for A Wolf's Oath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Yay he's finally going after her! And I'm so proud of Erica for keeping strong! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im really liking ryan right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heya! Not much help here, but just a note to keep writing! I do promise to keep reading. Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry for the lack of reviews my computer was down..omg.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ryan is great! I love his relationship with Sebastian :) Poor Erica, still captive :( I want Sebastian to find her soon! I had an awful day, but it's always nice to read this story. It was the highlight of my day :P See you on Thrusday |
![]() ![]() wish you would update sooner...but if it takes long to get a chapter fit for a perfect story, i guess i'll just have to wait for Thursdays! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Jenny, I adore your writing and pure dedication to your craft. Your characters, plot and just plain diction have improved immensely from the beginning of A Wolf's Duty! [I apologize for not reviewing until now. I just got an account! :-] The bi-weekly updates that appear like clockwork are amazingly inspirational. A few things you could work on are Erica and Sebastian's characters. They are already so life-like but I feel if we knew more about what motivated them beyond family and friends we readers could connect more. Also, at times the language seems a bit stilted and overly formal. Perhaps it's just the setting but maybe you could look into that! Thank you so, so much for opening your heart to us and I hope a love like the ones you write about lights up your life! Love, nomi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Erica! And yay for Ryan being rational about the situation~ I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Dragging it out! MORE? Yes? Thursday? YAY! I can't wait! ~Tzotel |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY he's going! Can't wait for 14! ~Faerie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you just couldn't randomly make him go back, but I'm glad he is worried about her and is going to go find her now. Those people are just sick for doing those things to her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay hes finally going after her. Goodness I hope he get there in time. I'm suprized it took him that long. His brother is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() RUN SEBASTIAN RUN! Hope he makes it on time! It doesn't seem like the hunters are going to kill her just yet so hopefully she won't die! Are you going to make a trilogy out of this? Either way keep up the good work and update as soon as possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this painful xD He took so long to decide to go look for her. |