Reviews for A Wolf's Oath
Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
No, Sebastian! Go find her!

I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
Destination chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Well, it seems that I have forgotten to review for the past tweleve chapters. Stupid me...

Anyways, before I start, I really do hope you get over your writers block. I'm loving this story - especially Sebastion'ss determination - and don't want it to end.

As usual with stories, I end up making a playlist for when I read the story, and this is no exception. Sadly, I've got to get my iTunes working again.

So, in light of that, I'm really, really enjoying this story, and, again, I hope you get over your block. 'Cause blocks, truly suck.

midnight84118 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
O thats sad i fell bad for Erica
Silly-girl15 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
ooh! hopefully sebastian realizes something is wrong quickly. ;)

Can't wait for the next update!
clair-a-net chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Oh my goodness hes just going to turn and go back. Gah shes in trouble he cant just leave her. I know that he doesnt know that but still there should be some type of instince that tells him his mates in trouble. I hope she can hold out long enough so he can go rescue her. and that she doesnt get too beat up.
NovelS chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
very short, but i guess im just happy your still updating:)
dreamercrys chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Shouldn't his instincts tell him something is not right? I hope he realizes it soon and goes to save her...
groundhog591 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Oh! This is really good! Poor Erica though :( Keep writing! Update soon!
Tzotel431 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Yes Erica, you stupid girl, should have stayed with the boy that loves you. Silly girl...

Poor thing! I hope that Sebastian finds her soon...that's a wink wink to you! Don't drag it out!

But you will, cause that's the way.


Wonderful chapter!

ChiaGirls chapter 12 . 5/28/2009

Sebastian where are you!

I need to know what happens! AH!

Sorry for the super frantic review xD

see you on Monday :)
J.L.Rodriguez chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Oh Erica, to run away from one problem to only get into another one! Very bad luck indeed. I hope things start looking up in the next chapter! Ignorant hunters, damn their ignorance! Let's hope Sebastian comes to realize why Erica hasn't returned to her siblings when he gets back to the clan.

I'm glad to hear you finished your exams, I'm sure you did very well on them ]. Writer's block just kinda creeps up on you, doesn't it? No worries, it'll fade eventually.
Anon Amos chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
EK...these bad guys really mean business. Already they are torturing our heroine. Now, even I wish that Sebastian had caught her. I do not even want to guess how angry the wolf will be, and Sebastian with himself after he finds out what happened. Gosh, I can’t stop thinking about the knife and the blood... After the all the funny, cute kiddy scenes with Eric, Sebastian and the kids, this story has taken a turn worse. Suddenly we began to see a darker side of things.

What a chapter. It is so suspenseful that is reminds me of a scene from a book called Vampire Files by P.N Elrod, one of my favorite authors. If you like dark, bloody, and cute vampires/reporters/ investigators, who live in the time of illegal alcohol and the rise of the American mafia then you will like this book. Me comparing your story to hers is a big complement I love this story and I would just die if this was never finished. I can say that I am not too worried about that, you have been great about updating. This review is encouragement for you, so keep up the good work.

Until next time I wish you good writing,

Kassandra Duric chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
OMG! That's so cruel. How could you do that to Erica? And how is Sebastian going to find her? It's not like she's in the next town over. Or is she? I don't know. But please! You have to make it so Sebastian finds her in the next chapter before I start screaming through Erica's pain! It hurt me to read what he did in the last paragraph!
abmoreland chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Oh no, she is in for it now. How will Sebastian know what is going on with her, if he was planning on giving her time to come back on her own. This torture could go on for days, poor Erica. She really should have just stayed with Sebastian, but I think that if she makes it out alive she won't ever leave him again. Boy I hope Sebastian figures out something is wrong quickly.
xox-simple-love-xox chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
oh my goodness, please let seb find her and soon. I hoped that seb would find her and save her but he didnt. Now I hope he will find her hopefully soon, please.

Great update as well cant wait for the monday one.:)
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