No, Sebastian! Go find her!

I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Well, it seems that I have forgotten to review for the past tweleve chapters. Stupid me...

Anyways, before I start, I really do hope you get over your writers block. I'm loving this story - especially Sebastion'ss determination - and don't want it to end.

As usual with stories, I end up making a playlist for when I read the story, and this is no exception. Sadly, I've got to get my iTunes working again.

So, in light of that, I'm really, really enjoying this story, and, again, I hope you get over your block. 'Cause blocks, truly suck.

-Jilli

O thats sad i fell bad for Erica

ooh! hopefully sebastian realizes something is wrong quickly. ;)

Can't wait for the next update!

Oh my goodness hes just going to turn and go back. Gah shes in trouble he cant just leave her. I know that he doesnt know that but still there should be some type of instince that tells him his mates in trouble. I hope she can hold out long enough so he can go rescue her. and that she doesnt get too beat up.

very short, but i guess im just happy your still updating:)

Shouldn't his instincts tell him something is not right? I hope he realizes it soon and goes to save her...

Oh! This is really good! Poor Erica though :( Keep writing! Update soon!

Yes Erica, you stupid girl, should have stayed with the boy that loves you. Silly girl...

Poor thing! I hope that Sebastian finds her soon...that's a wink wink to you! Don't drag it out!

But you will, cause that's the way.

Sigh.

Wonderful chapter!

Tzotel

OMGOMGOMGOMG!

Sebastian where are you!

I need to know what happens! AH!

Sorry for the super frantic review xD

see you on Monday :)

Oh Erica, to run away from one problem to only get into another one! Very bad luck indeed. I hope things start looking up in the next chapter! Ignorant hunters, damn their ignorance! Let's hope Sebastian comes to realize why Erica hasn't returned to her siblings when he gets back to the clan.

I'm glad to hear you finished your exams, I'm sure you did very well on them ]. Writer's block just kinda creeps up on you, doesn't it? No worries, it'll fade eventually.

EK...these bad guys really mean business. Already they are torturing our heroine. Now, even I wish that Sebastian had caught her. I do not even want to guess how angry the wolf will be, and Sebastian with himself after he finds out what happened. Gosh, I can’t stop thinking about the knife and the blood... After the all the funny, cute kiddy scenes with Eric, Sebastian and the kids, this story has taken a turn worse. Suddenly we began to see a darker side of things.

What a chapter. It is so suspenseful that is reminds me of a scene from a book called Vampire Files by P.N Elrod, one of my favorite authors. If you like dark, bloody, and cute vampires/reporters/ investigators, who live in the time of illegal alcohol and the rise of the American mafia then you will like this book. Me comparing your story to hers is a big complement I love this story and I would just die if this was never finished. I can say that I am not too worried about that, you have been great about updating. This review is encouragement for you, so keep up the good work.

Until next time I wish you good writing,

Anon

OMG! That's so cruel. How could you do that to Erica? And how is Sebastian going to find her? It's not like she's in the next town over. Or is she? I don't know. But please! You have to make it so Sebastian finds her in the next chapter before I start screaming through Erica's pain! It hurt me to read what he did in the last paragraph!

Oh no, she is in for it now. How will Sebastian know what is going on with her, if he was planning on giving her time to come back on her own. This torture could go on for days, poor Erica. She really should have just stayed with Sebastian, but I think that if she makes it out alive she won't ever leave him again. Boy I hope Sebastian figures out something is wrong quickly.

oh my goodness, please let seb find her and soon. I hoped that seb would find her and save her but he didnt. Now I hope he will find her hopefully soon, please.

Great update as well cant wait for the monday one.:)