Reviews for Teeter Totter Conversations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it was to short! |
![]() ![]() This is so cute! I love it! The only thing is that I noticed she seems more hyper than what she was in the first chapter so i think maybe you should just pick one. Not to be a bitch or anything lol i'm just sayin'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... very nice! And P.S.2... that should be P.P.S, but who cares, and that was really rather random... Good chapter! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, adorable! This is such a cute story! Oh and by the way, I love the name Chance, for Lilly's dad! Keep updating! -Nienna Bella |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute chapter and a little insight on their life. The dad should be ...Kent. Alex. Jack..James..Tony... i dunno it depends on his background really..dark hair and blue eyes...maybe something with a D. Derek. Damien...idk!Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, its different...um most dad names i know are like keith kevin joel adam o oo what about seth, he seems like a seth! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's got a great start! Definitely keep going : ) As for a name... maybe Mark? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... you could call him Aaden.. or Jack... or something like that! I like it though, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() um what about jack? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story cant wait for more hope you update soon as for names jayden robbie jack aiden vic(victor) mack luke ben jasper eric nathan micheal |
![]() ![]() This is a really cute story, you should definately continue. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good! ur a good writer! so update soon! bye bye:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww its cute! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds like an intriguing story. Lily sounds so cute for an eight year old. I can't to see Daisy and her father meet to see more of a back story. UD soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is a promising start i enjoyed it im trying to guess the age of the father im thinking 23 is the least and 26 being the most what ever the age i like this story loads and cant wait to see the direction it is heading! |