what the hell.

not cool. i skimmed like the first sentence of the summary, became super excited, clicked to the next chapter, and realized.

not.

cool.

Awful! Why not said up front that this is just a way to buy your ebook. You should not have even posted the first chapter. Even if this book is amazing, and you are a good writer, I will not buy. Deceitful way.

Can't wait. I'll definitely be buying it!
Is it June yet...?

In the last paragraph you say brenden is walking away leaving holly pushing Brendan towards the bus. I think you meant Robert instead.

its good so far

Thanks, now i have disney songs stuck in my head from the last chapter lol

Loved your story - Robert and Holly were perfect for each other and I really liked the psychological spin you put on their relationship. Great writing.

Loved it xxxx

This plan could backfire. She has already read about his jealousy problems because his first love was sleeping with other band members. It she pushes him too far he will do something rash and damage all of his efforts to reform.

One correction. You typed: "Holly prodded, perking her brow as she crossed his arms over her chest" I think that you meant that "she crossed HER arms over..."

I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing.

Now this chapter makes the whole story believable!

congrats on self-publishing!

Very much enjoyed. I'm really glad that she didn't cave halfway through her hours, and when she realized her feelings she finished her hours with everyone else. Her professionalism was an important part of her character for me, and I'm glad to stuck to her integrity. The way they meet is hilarious, and I really enjoyed how they got to know each other along the road. The proposal to Tanya had me cheering in my seat (seriously, I did a little dance while holding my breath - I managed to keep silent although there was much flailing - my roommate was asleep). The epilogue was a really nice way to finish everything off. I'm currently single and have been so for a while, but what Robert says captures nicely the feeling I'm looking for: someone who knows my flaws, who I trust with my flaws, because they love me anyway. Thanks for posting,

I enjoyed this story and got quickly engrossed I do think it was drawn out a bit I just wanted it to get there and I was a little disappointed in the epilogue I think it would of been better like a year later or something but I still enjoyed it very much :)

AH, I loved, loved, loved this story to pieces. Well done. Amazing writing, great characters, and the cutest storyline ever. Thanks so much for writing this! :)