Reviews for Always and Forever Yours |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha that last line was perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) love love |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Spectacular! I want a Quinn! *pouts* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think the story was a good idea and it was very cute, but i can't say i completely enjoyed it. For most of the story, it really feels like you're just telling what's happening. I think your story could be better if you showed what was happening instead of just directly tell us. and something else that kind of bothered me was that you switched between the third person and the first person a lot. It would have been fine if you kept the italicised parts in the first person and the normal story telling part in third person, but you didn't. It made the story a bit inconsistent, but overall your story is good in terms of its romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... Quinn is such a sweet guy. *sighs dreamily* Lucky gal. Wish I had a best friend/boyfriend like that. Loved, loved this. The whole story really potrayed Quinn and Alexis's relationship very well. You just can't help but fall in love with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww :D yes i aww-ed. sue me :P I LOVE THIS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was cute. But disgusting. He had a girlfriend, and he was sleeping with her. Does this girl have no standards what so ever? A little pathetic, not going to lie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awh, that is such a sweet story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha... thats sweet..! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that is so sweet and cute it just made me want to cry because I was so happy. It was the most cutest thing ever as I said. I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() anutha story full of pure awesomeness! jst so u kno, im jstsumrandomgirl XD, i go by that name wen im 2 lazy 2 log in lol but i wanted 2 add u and ur stories 2 my favs so here i am. not that u needed 2 kno ne of that but oh wellD. so. i read all ur one-shots and they r all freaking awesome! and so funny! i luv em, u got mad skills;). 1 day im gonna review all of em but not now, 2 tired lol. so newho yea. love em all. cya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love love love this story. so frikin cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story and how you had there relationship develop! I think it would be really nice of you if you wrote this story from Quinn's point of view! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! this is such a sweet oneshot. cute ending with the "and lived happily ever after until the kids came along" - lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say, the last few lines are completely random (Egypt?). Nevertheless, I thought this story was really cute. :) |