haha that was cute!

The last paragraph was hilarious!

Hahahaha! That was good. But at the last segment, I was like, "WTHeck?". Lol. Still cute, though.

I think there were definitely a few kinks that could be worked out to make it absolutely nearly perfection, but I can't remember them because I'm entirely unhelpful and am distracted by the hilarity of the last sentence. Wait, no, I remembered them. I agree with Ravina's review, a bit more detail and I think you could have revised some of your lines to better fit the mood.

Other than that... Um, I want my own Quinn. Like now. It was adorable.

aw

Very cute!

I just have to say, great last line. ) The story itself was adorable, too.

:D Naw~

It's cute, but the last part (the only first person POV part) was most definitely unnecessary and I wish there was some sentence variety. A lot of subject-verb, subject-verb. But yeah, very cute and realistic (enough for me), and I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:

that's too adorable

i loved it

and there's not much else i can say

izzie

I really like the transition of events, and the events themselves, but I think you can add more detail to the italicized bits to improve the story!

But I really enjoyed reading it! Good job!

- Rebekah

Ahahaha "That is until the kids came along." I laughed at that. Great story, very cute. I enjoyed reading it.

~Fell Off Her Rocker Again

I liked this a lot!

aww this story is soo cute

Aw, this was a cute read. Thank you for that love blast ;)