|Reviews for Define Coincidence|
| xClutteredxChaosx chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
So funy! Please continue this!
| yuanyuan chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
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| Samantha Biggers chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Very action-filled. I was on the edge of me seat reading the whole time, wanting to know what happened next. you are very good at keeping the auidence interested and wanted to read more. I enjoyed it very, very much!
| lili999 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
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| Le1chi chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Haha this is awesome! Alester is so badass
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I enjoyed reading this. It looks like it's going to be a fun story! I like Alester's character and I'm interested to know what will happen next. Keep writing!
| Smurph92 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
it wasn't that bad, but it doesn't reach to me that much. Maybe it's just not my type of writing I guess! :)
| Raingypsy chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Hey! Great one shot. It was really interesting and I loved the tag line!
'“What do the Muslims call it again...ah! Insaallah!*' I loved this line!
Good Work :)
| Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
It's different to read a story with such an unredeeming main character. All turned up good for him though didn't :) Poor blond has no car, car theif has a million dollars, no justice.
It's all really neat and ties up well beginning to end with the theme of Barenaked Ladies.
Cool little one shot!
Would like to ask you to read my one shot, Unforgiving Love, you like slash apparently so I'd love to know what you think :)
| ranDUMM chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Thanks so much for your review! I meant to return it, and then I forgot But that's okay, I'm here now!
Your story was pretty good! It was descriptive, and slightly dramatic, but not to the point of melodrama. Great one-shot! :)
| Ninja Chick chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I like it!
| r7gray chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Very interesting attention-grabber. Why do I keep seeing "the blond"? LOL, I just had to make that inquiry. Anyway, you did a very good job, it flows, too. I am curious about the wooden box and that piece of paper. Well done on that scene with Alester chasing the piece paper and when he finally gets it, it is a million dollar check. By the way, I could picture everything you described. Now, I am sitting here, in my bed, wondering... who is "the blond"? What is his role in the story? What's the wooden box all about, in addition to that mysterious piece of paper?
Your fictionpress friend,
Ari (a.k.a. r7gray)
LOL's. Your so funny. I love your dad's reply... "It'll be even funnier if you make him a Muslim."
| firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Wow, this is a really interesting idea for a story. I hope you continue it.
I loved all of your literary allusions, especially the Oedipus one. The chase scene was also pretty intense. And the ending-woah. Nice work!
| Javin Pilotte chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
ROTFL! THIS IS HILARIOUS!
I love how the main character is so badass. It makes everything so much more exciting.
-loves characters who does bad stuff and dreams about them-
| Jamie Ash chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
That was interesting. It wasn't like the usual kind of story i read on here. Not realistic, but fun anyway :) I can't say i like the character of Alester much. he seems obnoxious to me, but i did like the story. Especially how he met up with the owner of the car. How unlucky can you get? It was a pretty light-hearted piece of writing and it made me smile :) It was really enjoyable to read, especially when he was chasing after the piece of paper. I found it funny that he went to all that effort and he didn't even know what it was. If that'd been me, id have been like "screw it." Anyway, nice work!