This Story shows great promise and I would like to know the significance of the necklace. It sounds like there is truly a very evil creature or being in the Story.

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The hcaracterization is exccellent and I like the main character. I want to know what is going to happen to her. I looke forward to future chapters.

i give this story a 98 out of 100