Reviews for When Will You Love Me?
The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
]...last lines are perfect!
Forget-Me-Not's Desire chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
This is really good! I felt the emotion behind it! You really worked hard on this! Maybe you should try to write a rhyming poem, you'd be good at it! Keep writing!
xxNightenGalexx chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I love the story line of the poem, however you pattern is a bit thrown off in need to focus on the spacing of the breaks, it has an odd flow. But regardless im adding it to my favs because i adore it.