I like this apart from the cradle robbing (which I like cus it adds to the humour just not the hole pedo vibe) but in a hole I like the story and the humour up my alley wish there was more to the story as it rear to for to find a story that had me laughing as much as this one did. Also the hold dynamic of the two there something cute and adorable about it wish you keep writing.

This is really good i cant wait to see how emmi and daniel's relationship works out. please, Please PLEASE, update soon. _

aw. I really like this chapter! I hope you update really REALLY soon. hehehe. :]]

Great chapter! I like how Daniel is arrogant but beneath that there's a big, romantic goof.

Keep writing,

JV Hi-Fi.

Rawrs, update :D

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hey two inquiries

1. mckenzie told daniel her boyfriend's name is matt... then why did he forget so quickly?

2. i thought Angel's girlfriend's name it's J...not...A

I love what you've written!

I like Emmi's sardonic attitude, I love her already.

I can't wait for what's to come!

It's a nice "feel-good" story, although it seems that you over-simplified the main character. I know that it's because you're a girl trying to get into a guy's head, and I used to have the same problem getting into a girl's head, but maybe it's something you should look into. A main character has to be more complex, not just a device used to tell the story about someone else (which would be creepy considering you would need the guy to follow her at all times). The plot seems well-developed though, so that's a positive ].

LOVE the story :3

whoa

haha

tht's the quickest story ever...but i LOVE IT!~~

keep writing!

inform me when you update!

Seems pretty interesting. Can't wait to read the next chapter :)