|Reviews for Just Don't Mess With Us|
| llll.The Fallen.llll chapter 5 . 3/23/2011
oh my gosh awesome storyy ! it's like the funniest and yummiest thing i ever read ! hehehe
| NoodleNation chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
Aha, your story is so weird! (In a good way) It's not like any other story that's here on FictionPress. Not ever have I seen someone paint a story where the characters act so casual with the concept of polygamy. (In this case, they're aren't married though)
Your writing style is very humorous in a dirty way. I likey :)
The details you draw paints a vivid scene for me. I will most definitely check out the website to finish the story.
| Natural and fake beauty chapter 3 . 6/20/2010
aw. i wanna eat spagetti off naked men. ooh la la.
| Natural and fake beauty chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
well i dont wanna be on their bad side.
| Natural and fake beauty chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
i wanna have a family like this. just little oh me and 4 gay guys. i think i could die happy with that thought alone.
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
Aw, the link isn't working
Ah, well. Great story. Funny with characters that seemed real; like how the sex between Jamie and Alan isn't perfect - then it would be fake. And there's actually plot to, not just a smut fic filled with orgys and orgasms :O
So yeah. You're a good writer mate; keep it up
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
Twas a tad extreme, but VERY funny.
Usually, our dishes just kinda sit there and give off this "CLEAN ME" vibe...then I end up cleaning them, cos everyone else (glares around) is too lazy. Grr.
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
That...was the most brilliant pay pack plan i've ever seen or heard of in my entire life.
I hope to sweet jesus I never get on their bad sides...
Ignoring the fact they're fictional characters, of course.
What fantastic revenge !
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Can't decide whether to be in awe or horror of Jamie's sexual tendencies...
Let's go with awe :D
I like it; only read the first chapter and I think it's awesome.
Quite elaborate role playing. They got a script for that, or something!
Anyway! Great story so far.
| acorn2oak chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
Gods I LOVE these guys!
I couldn't stop laughing. Thanks so much for bringing them to life. More please!
| Tinted Windows chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
Lol this is so funny xP Really gd :)
| Shidoni8 chapter 5 . 3/23/2010
Excellent! Will there be more chapters? I love the characters, how utterly vivid and unique they are! And the situations they end up in are priceless. And the use of repetition in your style, using the same format for each chapter and the "you haven't lived until..." sentence among others. Awesome!
| Nick Ransom chapter 5 . 3/21/2010
Man...is there more of this? I really hope so. I really loved those guys...
| Nick Ransom chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
It reminds me of the people I spend 90% of my time with..
| ReeRee123 chapter 5 . 3/19/2010
Ahaha oh gosh, I LOVED this. I died so many times, especially when Matt's grandmother came to visit. I love how unique each of them are, and the way you write it is so accessible and just really freakin' funny. I shall now proceed to worship you appropriately.