Reviews for Brighter Than Anyone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, why did it have to end? I want them back! *sobs* anyway, away from the dramatics- That was such a great story! I want a man that loves me so much too! But I probably won't find him! *sobs again* you're great! I swear! You really ought to actually publish your stories! I've read some books that can't even compete with yours! Just one question, though... how do you name your chapters? I can't link them most of the time...so i just got curious! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, so I started to read all of your stories and I wanted to read this one first because I just finished Saving Smiles and wanted to see what else happened with Andie and Christian. I have to say that I loved this story as much as I loved Saving Smiles. It was really good. I thought you were very realistic with their relationship which I thought was very well done. I have to say one of my favourite bits was when Christian got angry and smashed a plate and Wendy's comment just made me laugh because it was hilarious. Plus, I can't believe how much Andie has had to go through... The poor girl. She's a great character though. Anyway, I stayed up until 1 in the morning reading this and I would've commented then but I was tired and this probably wouldn't have made any sense at all. Right, now I'm off to read your other stories :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw it's very cute! I'm glad I didn't decided to skip to the epilogue when the random flowers started popping up. I do want to ask, what happened to Renita? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was thinking along lines of Joker kidnapping Andie in revenge for hitting Taylor on the head with a vase, but Tracker's good too. (What happened to Joker & Taylor anyways? Jail?) Why does it have to be that females always kidnapped? ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love your sense of humor. "Flash the camera"-That is brilliant. If I ever had to do something like that (hopefully never), I will keep that in mind though I doubt I'd have a handy flashlight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot line! It's good Andie isn't pregnant. I'm not suggesting pregnancy is a bad thing,just in the plot it's a good. Now Christian can "suffer" and straighten up. Before I was thinking along lines of Patrick poisoning her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thank god. I was thinking of a four letter word occurring. Thank you for pacifying my mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! I wasn't even thinking it was Patrick. What a shocker! To think of it, Andie's scene reminds me that women can be defenseless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alpha male reference again! I hope I'm not picking up references where I'm not suppose to be. Storyline so far is very catching, Andie has three potential "suitors" and I am so tempted to read the epilogue instead of the next twenty some chapters just to find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice portray of the rich/famous. I have never thought of magazine and news portrays of celebrities as a bad thing even though it's so blatantly obvious. Now to think of it,they're always there trying to "wreck" your life and you have to please them. Celebrity relationships must need a ton of trust. Thanks for the insight! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I forgot to mention in my review of the last chapter in Saving Smiles that I absolutely love the ending formatted as a news story (maybe I did, I can't remember). Naturally, I love this opening too. It really puts a spin on your writing. |
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![]() ![]() That was great! Sequel? I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't know you could put Skype numbers on fictionpress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally got the chance to read the sequel, so sorry haven't been reading, university life is hectic. Aside from that, I absolutely love this story and I love the couple. I completely agree with the news reporter about meeting my match, from the sounds of this fiction you do make it easy to believe so. I love the descriptions of the photos, especially the 'third reception shot' and the 'fourth picture' - brilliant! Fantastic story, really enjoyed reading it! Tecna ;) |