Reviews for Brighter Than Anyone |
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![]() ![]() They are such a gorgeous couple, thus chapter made me cry; almost. I know you said that they would like any normal couple that have fights and stuff and i think that would make the story even better. But please don't make them actually break up because that would be so, so, so sad. I love Christian by the way, what i wouldn't give to meet a man like him. Keep udating, these stories are awesome! xobellajanexo P.S I have changed my name to This Afternoon so if i review whilst i'm online just know that, that is BellaJane. xoThisAfternoonxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Andie and Christian make such a excellent couple. I wonder who the lady at the dinner is going to be. I loved this chapter, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My spider senses are telling me this investor woman is Christian's ex. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter as usual but missing christian :( hopefully he comes back in soon. Also, just wanted to let you know that you called Marissa Miranda in this line: "Once the waitress had left, Marissa and Jessica proceeded to tease a very red Andie for the next five minutes before Marissa stated that she had very important and very serious news. The girls calmed down and each turned inward to look at Miranda." |
![]() ![]() ![]() imagine how i felt when you said that i was a review-er that made you happy. i was estactic! thank you, it made my day:D i loved this chapter, a really good sex scene! i cant wait or the next chapter! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe I love me some good smut! They did need a scene and I'm glad you did it ;) Great chapter! ] |
![]() ![]() This was an interesting chapter. When you read about sex it is usually i dont know dirty in a sort of way like what happens, but with Christian and Andie it seemed more sweet and loving then any else. I think you wrote this extremely well, love you. xobellajanexo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, loaded with passion. I loved it! Thanks for updating! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... there is a lot of passion in this chapter. Update soon! (: . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOT, HOT, HOT. Yes, this chapter was sizzling with heat and passion. Well done. Update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah steamy chapter! it was good though ;)! although i get the feeling the conflicts are going to come soon. i reread the summary and i dont really like the idea of a plotline with christian's ex girlfriend, idk thats just me. update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw That was cute Update soon X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! A second chapter to the long-awaited sequel. Thank goodness. Great job! I love it already! can't wait for more. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating! I can't wait to read about both of the marriages! update soon! (: ~ . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating! I can't wait for chapter 2! |