|Reviews for because children have weak stomachs|
| sundayguts chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Loved of te very best poems ive ever read.
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
i've always been a fan of parentheses,
but you've just taken my obsession to a whole new level
| noctema chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
i like the end.
it's like the parenthesis are seperating the words.
(fuck, it's not 'like, it is.)
i'm so tired.
reply to my letter!
*is being bossy*
but i love this poem. it's a lot different from your others, but that's a good thing. you're really maturing and i can see it.
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
"They won't find us here." Brilliant. Isn't it funny to think that when we were young, the thought of a light on in the room, or a blanket over our heads, somehow assured us that we were safe?
| Annie Jadin chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Relala already said what I wanted to, and better than I think I could.
This is a fantastic piece of writing. Makes me remember the "youmehimher" composite of little beings I used to be a part of, and mourn the distances that separate us now.
| Relala chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
A work of brilliance, sending me into a flashback life of childhood love and loss. This is more than a simple poem ...it is a piece of soul laid out upon a page for all to read and relate to. I adore they way you created this in the format of style. Again, brilliant.