I read this story b4 it was actually published and as soon as i realised I could buy it on iBooks I did. I can't wait for the rest of your stories to get published. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of Dane and Nicole's life

Well...some of people cant do that and we can just read it here.
what should we do?
i really like your stories and i really want to read this one too.

I'm definitly going to buy this book I know I will not be disappointed.

wow, this is great, congrats!

Congrats, and good luck.

Oh my goodness, I am so happy for you! I have been waiting for this since you first announced it. Next check I get, I'm getting this on my kindle, I can't wait!

Thats amazing :D, but by published you mean being printed or just switching websites?

You and your characters in their basketball shorts. :) I feel like I hardly know Dane or Nicole, though you have expanded much more on who Nicole is through her own eyes and Dane's. The picture of Dane, however, is not so clear.

I cannot remember what my plans were for Misty now that my anger has passed, but I would like to add Tyler and Kavi to my list of future victims, as character-death will be involved. He annoyed me so very much from the beginning, and I could not even say what it was about him...until now. He was arrogant, inconsiderate, and a misogynist to boot! All that "'no' really means 'convince me'" BS raises my ire! Moving on. _

I want to go through what I like and don't like about this story at some point, in hopes that my opinion will help you fine-tune and possibly publish this bad girl sooner rather than later! If that would be all right?

I am tired, but I like Dane's eyes being compared to smoke; that conjured up a much better image than the simple use of a color. At that point, I really got what you were going for and in visualizing that, I was able to imagine, what I feel to be, the look in her eyes as well as the look of her eyes, you get me?

And I'm off!

Yet another story I enjoy. Sad it didn't get published. If it ever does I'll definitely buy it to support such a great author. The story had very nice pacing. Anyway looking forward to what I read next.

They're so sweet together. I love how Dane stood up for Nicole's dreams. I hope that those kinds of love do appear in reality. :)

That was intense. I really hate Tyler.. So selfish.. I mean he's just using Nicole even when they were dating and now he wanted her back for him to look good in front of her parents. And her parents! Why would they believe other people over their child? That is so wrong. Also, Danny's parents.. How could they.. :(

Bold move from Nicole. If you want something, then make it happen.

Loving how they look out for each other. It's one of those confusing moments where the question will be- is there something more or is it just her normal behavior.

It's hard knowing that peo