|Reviews for Nkolas|
| MollyCW chapter 3 . 7/8/2009
wow, great chapter!
You need a few more commas; Sorry, I can't remember exactly where. You also misplaced a few apostrophes, again, I can't give you the exact words, sorry.
Great job! Update soon!
| MollyCW chapter 2 . 4/20/2009
Thanks for the mention! :D
I like the way Nik reacted, it was...well...I guess you could say realistic; the kind of reaction most people would do if they were told something similar to that.
Only two things; you need to spell out numbers rather than write them (you wrote 21, it should be twenty-one), and there was a word in there that you left a letter out of a word in there. I can't remember what word it was, just that it was near the beginning.
I can't WAIT to read more!
| MollyCW chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Nice. There's a few errors, for one, homework is usually spelled as one word; and for another, you're missing commas. I'm not going to go through and list them for you, because it's a bit of a lengthy chapter.
Awesome, though, I can't wait to read more!