Reviews for The Eternal Divinity Part 1: Eve of Destruction
heliophobia chapter 4 . 6/2/2009
omg MAYA you're story is amazing!

It's beyond amazing...it's it's...

lets see how should i put this, you just make me fall in love with your character (not in that way of course ;D)

and what's gonna happen to that hot blonde? sorry i'm having a memory loss at the moment...I want him back :(

hope to read more! and dun dun dun...

i wonder what's going to happen next O_O
T-i-s-h chapter 4 . 5/27/2009
hey, i know that there a part that i found hilarious but i juss couldn't remember it at skool. It was the part where the teacher was looking at her you-knows. I also think Adrian is gay, i don't know why, i juss do. I want to know more about whats happening to Bennett and for some odd reason i kinda dislike Kade. so if ur thinking about setting Talia up with Kade, please reconsider... to be continued

Ha how do you feel maya?... mhahahaha so keep writing
Shana - you know which one chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
You can interpret how i feel about the new chapter from my reactions at lunch!. I think that all that time i spend harrasing you has made you update it steadily. YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE it because its AWESOME nd yo know i'd tell you otherwise.

*We'll talk more on Sunday :)
CATM chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
Hey! “Hi, Tivi. Hi…wheezing new girl,” he greeted her hesitantly." - lolz :) my favourite line along with the part where her book fell she couldn't bend and Kade picked it up - after a run like that i don't blame her - like stupid 12 minute run in grade 9 - those should be illegal - :). Plz, Plz, Plz DO NOT make Kade related to her - plz - this is me begging - that's my only request! Anyways - loved it again - write more soon! Ttyl - C. :)
CATM chapter 3 . 5/18/2009
Hey! You're story is so good. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love Kaden - he's quirky. Keep updating! :)
THE PUKER chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
Well I couldn't stop reading till the end so now I'm kinda feeling sad. But hey Maya, I like it angsty too! TEE HEE

Tishy KEEP WRITING
Guess who - TEE HEE chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Well I so far have read the first two chapters but I will definitely read more as you write more because I hate waiting. Also as I wait, I tend to forget so I’m gonna take my time since I already favourited the site cause it seems really good.

Have you guessed who it is yet?

You probably will know me as “THE PUKER!”

KEEP WRITING but don't forget about school either!
shanaaaaa chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
yes the angst wasn't bad it was good angst if there is such a thing lol. Anyways its progressing along nicely. I will steal that notebook you always carry around jsut to find out what happens next. Please update regularly :)
shawna chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
Oh, and Kade should laugh at her while she's in pain.
shawna chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
Angstiness is appropriate here. I really like it. What's with the ocean-sky? That's neat.

I think you should make Talia get her ass kicked during Combat. That'll teach her some humility, 'bout asking people to go away when they were there first! (Just playing...about the last part. She really should get her butt kicked. It'll be funny.)
fan555 chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Hey

The story is awesome!

write more!
khaos-confiteor chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
Dah-ling! I love it. Continue! Muah dah-ling.
khaos-confiteor chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
* FLAME * FLAME * FLAME * FLAME * FLAME *

!Write me some gay porn!

* FLAME * FLAME * FLAME * FLAME * FLAME *
Lilycus chapter 2 . 4/25/2009
'Kay, I was /not/ expecting that o.o! Again with the leaving the chapter hanging. GAH. & Thanks for the Author's Note Comment XD! *Feels Special*

-lil
me chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
coom thers ssome spelling errors.. and gramer thanggs but girl?/... hurry upp and give me the second chap
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