Wonderful job! The meter is perfect, the whole thing very well worded...just amazing!

This is brilliant, a powerful poem which flows beautifully. You are a master m'dear.

Alex x

amazing. i love it. :)

"The graves are dug beneath your floor." Oh good lord *shudders* what a powerful/creepy line. :D

"The stench of flesh fresh decomposed." Say 'flesh fresh' three times fast hahaha. Nice wording (I mean that in a serious way now). :)