Reviews for White Swan
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
"Sparkling angels can fly away,

Because I no longer need

what they provided."

I liked those lines, they were really nice sounding. And, I know I've said this before, but I like the formatting! It's unique, I don't know anyone else who does that! D
MyNameIsDave chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
O! I like it! I like the formatting. It's different, so that's cool! lol. And as well as the song format..! Way better than I can lay out songs...heh.
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I like this poem/song very much. It is somewhat like your Elven fantasy with an angsty twist. Good job, lael! By the way, I also posted a few new songs. ;)