Reviews for My Path My Choice
Bushwah chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Decide what?
Splash Where Tear Drops chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Good poem! Just one thing:

Path is block, this is a sin

Did you mean: "Path is blocked, this is a sin"?

Sugestions: Maybe it should be simpler

#1: Path is blocked, this is sin


#2: The path is blocked, this feels like sin

You can leave it, I'm not flaming, I'm helping (I hope).

Happy writing!

thatkid chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
it's good

ps can you read my stories