Reviews for Playing With The Big Boys |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() I really like this story so far. I think that maybe you could add in some more funny moments with her as Perry trying not to get caught. I hope you keep her disguise going on for a bit longer, theres so much more you can do :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! it's been forever since i've caught up on this story, but it's grown up without me. *so proud* it's wonderful, can't wait until the next installment. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story it was very interesting can't wait until Perry meets Vince and the twins |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mine is exactly the same, and I've really wanted yo update for some time aswell. |
![]() ![]() Wow...Why am I not surprised? Nice going :) The chapter was nicely done - a lot of emotional conflict and valuable insight into the characters. Try not to delete this one, alright? PS: tell the New Year's baby I said happy birthday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE you! I just registered for FP and I found your story almost instantly! I read it all just now and I can't wait for more! I love stories that aren't mainstream so I'll give you some imaginary cookies for you because of your originality and creativity. Please update soon for the newbies! ~WLA~ |
![]() ![]() Lol. No probs. Although I'm not surprised you did that, since you do kinda suck with technology. :) JK. Such an emotional chapter this one, but the only thing I would've liked more was some description on her big bro Lukas. He sounds like SUCH a hottie! :D Can't wait until the next one, so update soon (like, within the next couple of months soon). |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! it was so cute! the ending i mean, and the part where lukas comes. i wanna big brother like that! actually, i want a big brother period but that's beside the point. it's really sad about the coward thing...and the stones and getting beat up. kind of messed up. but i like the emotion you put into all of it. really awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is good! You've taken a theme that's not very rare yet not too overused and instead of it being a cliche it's anything but - adventure, good characters, interesting plot. I really can't wait for a new update. PS! Happy holidays and a very merry 2011th! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, I really like Nix. It's actually quite cool that she sort of has 2 different personalities too as Nix & Perry. I like the idea/plot too, but I'm really starting to wonder if she's not too easygoing for someone mourning, ripped apart from family, being undercover & being an agent too. I mean - wouldn't she be more inroverted & paranoid if she were all that? Besides her disguise not being one and her having a double undercover life wouldn't that be too risky... But I like her anyway, so update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the whole thing this morning. Please continue! It's a wonderful story, I can't wait until the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm really diggin this story so plz post a new chap soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good but quite confusing, every second you change the boys around and theri friends, and i get muddled! but i seriously love this! one more thing i dont get as well is how Phoenix can be a teacher and student at the same time! |