Reviews for i did i fell
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I like the ending here; it's familiar, but not used like I normally see. I like how you described their faces as "ugly" because though I don't think of physically ugly faces when you say that, I think that in the narrator's head they are ugly people. Nice work.

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Electricityscape chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
wow.

ok, I like it a lot, it's really powerful.

The ending was great.

Even if there's no clear explanations, it expresses a lot.

well done.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
That's a bit...depressing. I like how it began, and then sort of unexpectedly ended. Not in the drawn out, "woe is me" kind of way, but more like this is the way it is, deal with it. If you want to jump, jump. You'll die, it won't last in that in between state forever. Great job.