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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, this is lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww cute story ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story tho I felt that there were minimal plot twists. This is not something I am used to. I realised that you didn't really mention why Gloria had to undergo the IVF procedure. Was it because of herself or Preston? I think you should do a story or at least a series of oneshots on Olivia and Charlie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last part of this chapter didnt reflect anger. Besides that, the entire chapter was sweet. I like how you change the focus of your chapter frequently and smoothly. As such, the story doesn't seems so draggy, boring and repetitive. I came across you with the help of Lostnfound007. She recommended you in many of her author's notes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been liking the story so far. I hope it doesnt go downhill from here :) Everything seems to be going good so far but I know that I will be surprised cos I honestly cannot think of anything thay will go wrong, except maybe Justin's mother hating Jessica. I know that I am slow but I am sorry to hear about your mom. Hope that you are okay :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha good ending to what has been a wonderful chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story already :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erm, I know that this story was published a good while ago, but Justin would know what a Blastula is if he majored in Biology. |
![]() ![]() ![]() liked the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely : ) |
![]() ![]() I LOVEEEE this story! I just read the whole thing, and I absolutely LOVE it. Please come back soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Justin is a total sweetheart. He is so adorable. Jessica and Justin are a horny bunch, aren't they? Lol. They're adorable though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My main reason for this review is just to say how awesome it is to have the names Jessica and Danielle in here like this cause that's my friend's and my name and it's a conversation we would have. The coincidence is just amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe it's over. I have to say it was a pretty good ride. I'd love to see how Abbey's story goes because it wasn't really a closure with her character in the story. |