Reviews for A Moment
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I love the format! It is so interesting && the bold/italics/etc add to how you read it. I found myself saying words in bold in my head loudly && italicized (sp?) words were more urgent. Lovely piece.
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Loved it. The format of it is really really good, it was great! Keep it up!
musicman108 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Very powerful poem. The only thing that bothered me was that some of the line breaks made it hard for me to read some words.

You've got great potential!

Keep up the good work!

:D
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
"I

fell

Into

your Arms

I'd

be

safe

for

a

Moment"

That part was awesome! Great poem, once again! D