Reviews for A Note Inside Your Bag
Zoeybird101 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
This is a master peice. You got the suicde note/poem thing down pacted. Really great job. Ps. I love your work :)
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
ive left a suicide not in someones bag. are you sure ur not stalking me?
The Chaos Sorcerer chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I love this one. Lots of detail and i could feel the emotions trying to be put across. A great poem! A

Oh, and in case you're wondering, yes i am going to rate a lot (if not all) of your writings :P
Demony chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Much more straight forward than my poems :) I suppose some people like using strange symbolism and metaphors others prefer straight forward and direct meanings.

Love the lines "Be sure to read it well / This is the last thought I'll have / Before I go to Hell."
Isca chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
"I push myself just one last time to go to school today." I've had so many days like that-it's hard just to get out of bed and face the world.

"In just a couple hours more, I’ll really soon be dead." Although this part is really sad, it flowed well. :)
thatkid chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
please don't die jk its great. i can feel the emotions. no i'm not planning on killing myself though

ps please read and review my stories