Reviews for Just Another Lonely Girl
ShadowsOnTheMoon chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I really, really liked that. The rhyming scheme made it flow so well.

Well written, great style, interesting theme.

Good work.
Remera chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
TT_TT Sadness! This is a wonderful poem, but it is also highly depressing. It reminds me of my best friend.
Through Glass Eyes chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
whoa... enough said
Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I know I've told you already,this is a truly brilliant piece. It's powerful and lingers in the mind long after the reader has finished it.

Love alex x
thatkid chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
the story is great. little voices in her head/tell her she'd be better dead. i can feel the sheer emotions of the poem.

ps please read and review my stories if possible
Christine Erik chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
This is very good, very powerful. What song did you have in mind?
Isca chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
"She whispers to the evening stars." BEAUTIFUL!

"Somehow she just carries on." A true warrior.

"The lonely ones will alway disappear." I like that you ended on a sad note. :)