Reviews for Reset
It's Me Jadie D chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
I wonder what the accident was which had Brian and Daisy swap bodies in a way. I would guess that they were connected, but you're good at keeping things under wraps! It was really clever how you managed to gradually swap from talking about "Brian" to talking about "Daisy" almost like their change was initiated.

And the drawer with all the porn in it, LOL. Such a typical boy thing, right? I liked Brian's constant questions in his head too, like when he was wondering what to do about Selene, and whether he should ask her out or take her home - as girls I suppose it's natural to not wonder about these things because it's normally seen as the "guys job". :D

Only thing I would recommend is breaking up the sentences a little bit? They're not too long, but it's just that a lot is said in one sentence, and it would give the reader more impact to the key facts if it was a little shorter. But I really like this! Did you ever finish?

xoxox Jadie
It's Me Jadie D chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Heya! :D

I just read this and it is so interesting :D I love that Daisy is so blunt about what happened, so matter of fact, kind of like "Yes, I died and it wasn't that great and it was just a crappy end to a crappy day." Almost as if death isn't a big deal, even though it's obviously the biggest deal of all cause it's well, death :) I liked that though. And the part about the tunnel not even starting or stopping because there was no light and no tunnel, that was genius!

Very interesting twist that she's turned into a boy somehow. Its kinda like that movie "It's a Boy Girl thing." I love that film! But I love this so far. Maybe someday you'll want to continue it, or maybe not, but either way, this was lovely :)

xoxo Oodles of love!

Jadie

xoxo
Hero child of Leonato chapter 2 . 4/19/2009
Wow love this story, please update ASAP !
Hero child of Leonato chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I really enjoyed reading this. Please update as soon as you can. YAY!

:)
WinMyHeart5444 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Very original! I've never heard anything like it before. Your writing style (not your story!) reminds me of Deb Colleti. Have you ever read any books by her? I'd think you'd like her. The only suggestions I would give you, is that your paragraphs can get too long. I would break them down into smaller ones, it makes the whole thing easier to read. I like how I can already see the personality of your main character. She sounds like shes going to be something else! Also, one more suggestion. Your beginning explanation of that happens when you die? Your sentences contain too much... stuff.. in them if that makes sense? I would break them down again into smaller sentences. It will make your character's opinions on death easier to follow, and it will bring out dramatic effect. It will also help get your readers invested in your story! Awesome job, keep it up!
steffxnie chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Pretty good. :)