|Reviews for silhouettes|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
I like your hypothosis here; sometimes you do have to laugh about it, only because it hurts too much to take it seriously. Keep up the good work.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
so many little negatives about run round
thinking their "n" "o" so cool & in style
a pettiness that makes them shrink to naught
except pejoratives that they can sound
sometimes the bitter words can hurt i've found
leaving impressions that remain a while
though quick forgetting them i know i ought
they can accumulate a putrid mound
but getting spun-up & in tizzy wound
is sometimes best dispersed with a sweet smile
hard fought, yet winning with a profound thought
that can disperse ill feelings with a bound
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
"your shadow, screaming chink"... shouldn't it be screaming, "chink"
Interesting piece. I was expecting something bad to happen, but the ending was actually really almost funny. Your descriptions in the first stanza and the second to last stanza were especially great.
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| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
very powerful; i especially like that you compare the color of skin to "silhouettes"