this was a great read, thank you!

Awwwww 3

Your last update was in '10, but I can only you'll continue with this story. It's amazing on all accounts.

Lisa. Damn it, that girl. I just feel so bad for her.

I'm back! :P Felt like rereading this. It's 1:30am. O_O Anyways. It's obvious that Laura likes Rayne, why else would she care? Just sayin. :P

We kissed, weakest. Nice one. Heya. :] This story could be so much longer. :P But it's good. Thanks for sharing.

Are you serious? Good gravey, woman, you're just goning to leave the story like this? What the WHAT? Gahh, for the love of all that is good and pure can ya at least tell us what you were going to do for the rest of the story. Please? Just a tiny bit of something? :)

Greetings!

I've meant to review this story ages ago and I'm sorry to say it won't be as profound as I would have liked it to be. But at least it's something.

It's really an interesting story you have here with Laura and Rayne. I was admittedly a bit worried that you at first would rush things and have them insanely in love and together by the first few chapters, but as it appears it took longer which I'm as the reader is grateful of. Apart from that I like how you clearly keep the beliefs and traits with all the characters in the story and that you don't seem to make them all the same and grow at the same pace. We all handle things differently.

So with that said, even if it was quite a while ago you updated this I strongly believe it's worth take it up again and finish, I'd like to see how Laura and Rayne will handle what will come.

Apart from that you have a really nice and smooth writing style, which is easy to follow and flows nicely. I normally isn't one to like constant POV changes as often as you do them, but it works out quite well and I can see why you wish to do it. Simply because it's about the two girls and their journey to set their differences aside for something greater and feelings that are slowly growing between them. It's quite endearing to see.

So with that said I'd like to encourage you to keep writing, if not this story, just keep writing because you're good at it.

best regards

/Kajskk

Wonderful story. I really cut to my soul, and brought a range of emotions. I like the integration of the dark outlook of life with sex, drugs, and depression and the questions a faith in God. It gives this story some depth and dimension to the characters you have created. I absolutely feel in love with this story, and gradually grew to love your main characters. Again, it's a wonderful story to read and I would like to continue reading it. :)

Very good. I really liked your story. Very deep and touching. The end of that chapter was so sweet. I hope you update soon.

I have made a terrible mistake and read the rest of this today. Now I must suffer like everyone else and hope you decide to update. Perhaps I will ransom future chapters of my own work in hopes of forcing you to write more.

Some thoughts:

1.I found Emma's reaction to Rayne a bit of a sharp turn from the vitriol of their earlier relationship. It made sense but felt a bit inauthentic.

2. I am still confused by your use of Laura's catholicism. Is there a small-c catholic movement in the UK which is separate from the Roman Rite which allows married clergy and for women to give sermons?

Otherwise, I find this story delightful. Rayne and Laura are equal parts frustrating and compelling and I honestly enjoy their connection. I like how you have both challenge each other without forcing the other to change. It's excellent.

So, update? I don't understand this 6 month hiatus. It's not like I once took seven years to write a story on here or anything. *whistles innocently* UPDATE.

If I didn't have to go to bed, I would finish this story tonight. Laura and Rayne are both engaging and frustrating in the right ways (I see you have a soft spot for Lauras, haha). I think it's very believable that Laura has become so attached so quickly (her meltdown over Rayne ignoring her). She seems very vulnerable.

One question: what is Laura's fathers role at the Catholic Church. You've described him as the reverend but he's married and has a girlfriend so priesthood seems unlikely. Is he deacon? This confused me but is a minor point.

Anyway, I am going to take this story slow because I already sense an addiction forming and you haven't updated in forever. I suspect you'll need your own bunker soon enough.

I really loved Laura in this chapter. The confidence she had, calling her therapist and having breakfast with her, definitely shows a change in her, and I'd say Rayne had something to do with that :) And the graveyard scene was so sad. Thank you for giving a more complete picture of what happened with Rayne's family. I do love the dynamic you give her and Laura; it's realistic and edgy and very readable. Can't wait for the update :D

Another wonderful chapter :)

It's good to see they're finally accepting their feelings for each other. And Rayne's take on Laura's feelings was interesting. Hopefully they'll work out their problems through each other.

Can't wait for the next chap!

awesome story. awesome chapter.

please update, and have a nice day.