|Reviews for Acceptance|
| Chu-Chi Bear chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I HEARD YOU NEEDED REVIEWS! Lol
Small little mistake i wanna help you point out.
"She was looking like me as if she was the cat and I was the mouse, and I realised that that was exactly what we were in this game." (You meant she was looking "at" me. I know, writing sorta gets the best of you and you can't catch small things, you need others to catch them for you.)
Anyways, the story was very intense. You gave a really good feeling of what the characters were like and a good start of their personality, and that's really good. Even better was, the chapter was a really good length. I hope you keep this up and add another chapter soon.
| nitro-girl-3 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Good story so far, i really enjoyed reading this and it held my interest all the way through. Hoping there will be another chapter soon which i look forwards to reading. :D