|Reviews for Children of the Olympians|
| Good story chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I liked it, and I hope to read more.
"Theirs nothing positive"
I think that should be There is nothing positive. I think you only us their for a show of possession. "Like The ball was theirs."
"perhaps people will be more kind-hearted than the people in her new school."
I think you meant to put old school instead of new.
| MaskedNightingale chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Odd last name. Like it, probably kind of foreshadows the whole elemental thing, right?
I'm ashamed of FP people sometimes, how they don't give new stories a chance, I hope you get new/more reviews.
Oh, by the way thanks for your enthusiastic review on my story, and favorites- it seems I don't get much of those.
Thanks again, and please update soon.