Reviews for Children of the Olympians
Good story chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I liked it, and I hope to read more.

"Theirs nothing positive"

I think that should be There is nothing positive. I think you only us their for a show of possession. "Like The ball was theirs."

"perhaps people will be more kind-hearted than the people in her new school."

I think you meant to put old school instead of new.
MaskedNightingale chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Odd last name. Like it, probably kind of foreshadows the whole elemental thing, right?

I'm ashamed of FP people sometimes, how they don't give new stories a chance, I hope you get new/more reviews.

Oh, by the way thanks for your enthusiastic review on my story, and favorites- it seems I don't get much of those.

Thanks again, and please update soon.
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