Reviews for Come Up for Air
brunettelitlover chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
A sweet little poem, with an overused subject. If you want your poetry to stand out, you must find soemthing other than the ever present "being saved from drowning in my own sadness" cliche much?

Also, for such short lines it ran a bit long to hold my attention. The ending was nice though- the last four lines, that is.
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I LOVE this one! Beautifully done. I love the description and the way you...put it I guess:)

WRITE ON!