Reviews for Headache
Guest chapter 12 . 1/15
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Random chapter 12 . 6/10/2012
It was wonderbubble... I enjoyed it from start to finish even though it was short and fas
IRatherLikeFairytales chapter 12 . 10/6/2011
This was cute, I really liked it.
Keenon chapter 12 . 6/15/2011
It's kinda hard to believe that all of this happened because of a one-night stand and that it's only been a couple of days since that... but it fits. I don't know how you did it, but it works :p

Great work, keep it up (y)
Crithach chapter 12 . 5/21/2011
I cannot say how much I love you. You write just my type of stories; the sappy, happy kind that have raw and unhappy emotions. Daniel is such a charming character. All broken and thorny, but still smooth and absolutely desirable. And Ryan...reminds me of myself, even if I am a girl. I actually had my 21st birthday this tuesday. ..Nothing this nice happened to me though. *sighs*

Oh, and I loved Zen thoughts! And Kevin! Actually, I liked all of the characters. Very good characterization once again.
DeicystPi chapter 12 . 4/29/2011
MOAR
moon01234 chapter 12 . 3/21/2011
This is a really good story. The only thing I think you need is a sequel. Like when is Kevin going to confide in Ryan? Will we meet Mitchelle so that she is chopped, hashed, mashed and burned? How will Ryan's family act with Daniel's? ect

Can't wait to read more of every story you have written.
wildeep chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
I really loved the couple you've written here. At first, I was kind of thrown by how the main characters so easily accepted things but now I think it's great to have a story without the whole OMG-freakout!-runaway! morning after scene (I've read plenty of stories with those, anyway.) and to have the two lovers so willing to try out their new relationship.

The kids are, of course, cute. :)

I've read and re-read Headache a few times, actually, just because I like the characters so much. It's too bad there isn't more to read on Daniel/Ryan...but you've got plenty of other stories for me to have fun with. :)
SeveRemus chapter 12 . 10/13/2010
Hello, there! I was trying to write but was so uninspired that I decided to read something instead. I wanted to read your "Are You Together?" but its length was daunting, so I chose this one instead. Lo and behold, the Evil Michelle! LOL

I'm so glad I stumbled on this story! I'll have to read your other ones, too, when I've got more chunks of time. _
Dark Lynnette chapter 7 . 8/30/2010
Could this have been any cuter? It was a unique start. Did not see the kids coming. I also thought he'd hightail it out of there asap.
Kura-sama chapter 12 . 10/14/2009
I like these short drabble style chapters quite a bit. I always like knowing different people's point of view.

Hope to read more soon
Kura-sama chapter 5 . 10/14/2009
Hmm... this chapter cleaned things up a bit... they still don't know each other and I just feel like there should have been a bit more elaboration on how he felt (usually there would be awkward moments before the lovey moments...)

Overall it's a cute story though It's distracting me from studying... yikes.
Kura-sama chapter 4 . 10/14/2009
Does Ryan even know Daniel before he slept with him? The first two chapters seem to indicate that Ryan doesn't really remember much of what happened when he was drunk, since he didn't even know who he slept with, and now all of a sudden they're chummy and behaving like they're shy in love ... I don't feel like there was adequate introduction between the two of them and not enough flow going from drunk night with a stranger to lovey dovey morning after...

I mean, Daniel is out of the blue asking him to redecorate his house and possibly even hinting at asking him to move in... and I don't even know if they have ever met before...
Barkers3 chapter 12 . 8/22/2009
Aww, seeing it from Daniels perspective makes it all so sweet.
Barkers3 chapter 9 . 8/22/2009
Okay the whole thing seems cuter now. Sorry for my previous review, I was confused a little because everything moved so quickly.
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