Reviews for Eternity
the.little.things.matter chapter 2 . 4/21/2009
As you might've already noticed, I've accidentally clicked that submit review button before I was able to edit what i've copied and pasted into the window

so so so sorry

(this was partly our dog's fault... lol)

anyway, those lines just missed commas, no biggie. And i think you meant 'jewelry'.

other than that, nice, nice work

short though...

i'll be waiting for more of this _
Megan Ariano chapter 2 . 4/21/2009
Business was pretty slow today but to be honest that was how she liked it.

When you'd lived for as long as she had money no longer became something to worry about.

Once inside the store appeared even smaller as it was crammed from floor to ceiling with numerous texts.


And as she was now nearing three hundred years old she was more than ready to accept her fate.
Megan Ariano chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
nice start

hope she doesn't regret doing it

eternity can be a handful

anyway, this isn't a one-shot right?
JD Kirkland. Taurus Land chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I really like your style of writing. The way you explain things is so astonishing, every detail seems to stick.

~J.D. Kirkland- KH