Some lovely imagery in this. :)

This was sad!

Oh god... Not what you need in the morning. I feel tears press! :'O

Can I ask what happened to your mother, or is this just straight fiction in the arse? xD

It came as a shock, the mother part, and I didn't really understand it 'till I read the sentence again. *Sigh* How sad can life be, if you got time to cry over a poem...

*Thumps up!* And keep up the good writing. :)

This is a wonderful poem with a sad twist in the end. I LOVE it! I especially liked: "Spins of yarn from the spider,/Weave the life of my spirit." and many others of the lines. Actually, I loved the whole poem.