|Reviews for Two Faced|
| Mysterious MD chapter 5 . 7/31/2010
Great chapters, they are amazing. The sequel is just as amazing as the original story! The story is fantastic and I really hope you continue it! Keep up the great writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| CowwGirl chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Really good so far (:
I really likes shift and I wanna know what happens next.
Post more soon please :D
| GoldenEyedFury chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
really good so far. update soon
| Storyteller's Shadow chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I liked that a lot! I really did! It was well written. There was a line 'I pulled my messy hair back up into a neat ponytail' I woudn't say 'neat' ponytail. Messy hair is hard to put in a neat ponytail, just say ponytail. Other then that, great job! I hope for an update soon!
PS. Add in that this is also the second one for Shift, since it would be better if they read Shift first because it's edited.
Also, for the trailer, I thought Claire had curly hair? (I kind of forgot to mention that)
| Molly Witten chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
There were a few missed commas, of similar nature to the ones I caught in Shift. There was a spelling error, you wrote 'expect' rather than 'except'.
Great job; update soon!