Ok. Two choices. To continue or not to continue.

My advice: To continue.

What can I say, I loved it.

And now, I will sit patiently and wait till you update, and if you do, I might just post some more reviews up. :)

Something about the inconcievability of this, all mixed with this light sarcasm of "Lara 2"'s and " dig up the floor and tunnel my way out"'s and "inconspicuous brick walls" and that ridiculous/fantastic escape just makes me like it.

Should you continue writing something with wit, candor, nonsensical plot twists, and attractive n'er-do-wells?

No, no, just leave us to suffer with another "she's the good girl with a cynical past who's gonna make it, he's the rocker who secretly loves puppies, wut will happen?" garbage-ola tales. Those are great, too.

Ignore my sarcasm, ignore the critiques of stupidity, do me a favor of utter huge-oscity and write this for me. Call it a personal favor, and you then shall have all the goats upon a thousand hills. It's now a contracted deal. God bless!

i truly enjoyed reading that! please please please update! that was really good. honestly it was . . . i guess all you need to do is proof read and stuff [there were some typographical errors and stuff]. haha. great work!

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Hey, great story! Update soon!

I have to say that it is just a little bit strange seeing something like this from you after reading your vampire story, but I think I like this just as much so far. I love these characters you've come up with - as well as the story overall, really - and I definitely think you should continue. :) Update soon?

~Livvy

I really like this so far! It's very funny and definitely sucked me in from the beginning. I love your opening sentences with the life lessons bit. Very entertaining, and I can't wait to read what comes next! :) Happy Writing!

This is cool.. Update soon! :)

Hello!

Hmm... I enjoyed this chapter, and I'd read the rest if you continued with it, if that helps you decide.

I like the sound of Russ- he sounds a little dark and dangerous- the guy who you hate but can't help falling for.

If you have the time, please check out my story and give me some feedback- thanks!

Syl

Lol, this was engaging and hilarious. What I like about this is the fact that the damsel in question has very un-damsel like qualities and the knight is in armor that isnt squeaky clean. Looking forward to more.:)

I love it! And I really wish you would continue.

You should continue it.