Reviews for Scary Mary
cindy chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I am gothic so love it
MidnightSun95 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
this had a really good flow to it. I loved the rhythm of it. Also, it had a good idea behind it. Great job. XD
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
You created a really haunting effect mixing a nursery rhyme with a suicide. (It kind of reminds me of this one book of German fairy tales where the main characters always end up dead...but I guess that's off-topic.) The lines flow particularly well in this poem, and like the way the ending is a bit sudden.
LostInMe chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I quite like it! The rhythm is pretty good, and I like the words, of course. I'm impressed with your ability to create rhymes on the same line that still make sense.
Isca chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
"Scary Mary, we are wary, you’ve come to do us in." This poem flows so well, but this line in particular is my favourite, because it's so fun and cheeky.