Reviews for The Puck Queen
Mrs. Awesomesauceness chapter 41 . 3/19
I think the only mistake I saw consistently was "mind as well" which should be "might as well". But maybe it is a colloquial term. This was a really good story. I appreciate the depth in the characters and the plot twists.
loany chapter 41 . 1/30/2014
joshua and christopher are smart
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
"Alright, back to mitochondria." This one really cracked me up. :P
do-not-lie chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
i like your story! heart pumping really! wow.
LivMore chapter 41 . 11/3/2012
olive this story! I've been looking for an ice hockey story for ages and I've finally found. you should write some more *wink, wink*
deadspace33 chapter 28 . 9/15/2012
strong female character good story
LittleMissHugALot chapter 13 . 8/28/2012
the aunty is a cow. LOVE IT!
LittleMissHugALot chapter 9 . 8/28/2012
Love it! she is such a strong character you've done well. I know the perpous of each character and its sticking. Keep it up.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
Ohhh, CONFLICT! ahhh cant weight to see what happens next.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
good! id love them to be longer but they're amazing. really well written.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
love it! she's so driven! amazing.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Yes! that was good. Characters were strong, i really want to find out what happens next.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
Love the humour. You just need to find your place with jess. I get that she's going into a new school but is she kick ass or is she a shy, girly girl who wants to try out for childrearing. Find your place and then youll be getting somewhere.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Nice. I love the way you're building up the characters. You're doing well.
LittleMissHugALot chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
"Yes, don't worry everyone will be wearing one."
"Well of course they will… It's a uniform"

Love the quote. Chapters need to be longer. Love where its going.
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