Reviews for The Puck Queen |
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![]() ![]() I absolutely loved it! Which there was more. Now I got to go check out Wattpad |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the only mistake I saw consistently was "mind as well" which should be "might as well". But maybe it is a colloquial term. This was a really good story. I appreciate the depth in the characters and the plot twists. |
![]() ![]() joshua and christopher are smart |
![]() ![]() "Alright, back to mitochondria." This one really cracked me up. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story! heart pumping really! wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() olive this story! I've been looking for an ice hockey story for ages and I've finally found. you should write some more *wink, wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() strong female character good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() the aunty is a cow. LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! she is such a strong character you've done well. I know the perpous of each character and its sticking. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh, CONFLICT! ahhh cant weight to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good! id love them to be longer but they're amazing. really well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! she's so driven! amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! that was good. Characters were strong, i really want to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the humour. You just need to find your place with jess. I get that she's going into a new school but is she kick ass or is she a shy, girly girl who wants to try out for childrearing. Find your place and then youll be getting somewhere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I love the way you're building up the characters. You're doing well. |