"Yes, don't worry everyone will be wearing one."
"Well of course they will… It's a uniform"

Love the quote. Chapters need to be longer. Love where its going.

love it. Don't understand why sh'es so mean to her uncle and aunt though. but it got stronger towards the end. Nicely done.

"I only drive it because my hockey stuff doesn't fit into the Porsche."
First world problems haha. I love this story!
-faboo

Love your story, beautiful! Keep Writing Plz! :)

Amazing story!
I really would love there to be a second story maybe later on in their life.
Anyways yeah thanks so much for uploading this story its amazing!

You have good ideas but i think you should organize this story better and expand. things happened so quickly and some situations seemed blown up into something that should have been called out by someone

I loved the whole story, despite the very few - and very, very minor - mistakes. The plot was awesome, the way it was written was great, and the format was easy, except the last chapter. I got so confused! Anyway, thanks for sharing this awesome story!

LOved it was different but great story!

This is an awesome story! I'm glad that Avery's ok and that Jessica got her hocky team.

Really good story from the beginning to the very end. Keep up the good work.

daaawwww~! cute.

Really good chapter and story. Keep up the good work.

yay a new chapter!

but i dont know whether to feel happy or sad at this new development...

:D XD

Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.

im too lazy to log in but that is my actual name.

DAD, please (please) do not come between the adorable couple, at least not permanently...or i may have to come and stalk you...

i kid i kid, but i would be really upset if their relationship ended up being awkward just because of an annoying dad...

good chapter!

can't wait to see what happens next!