|Reviews for Life|
| GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Yeah, life sucks. It hurts. And it's full of things that are hungry for your pain. But in the end, I like to think that it's all worth it. I really hope you can work things out with your friends. Losing something as rare as a true friend really is a heartbreaking experience. My "best friend" and I were so close that we finished each others sentences and knew what the other was thinking just by looking at them. She destroyed all of that, years of memories and inside jokes, in less than a week. All because I wouldn't tell her what she wanted to hear. The bad thing about "best friends" is that they know the words that cut the deepest.
I really hope your friends aren't like that:)
As for the poem (yeah, I've kinda danced around THAT subject) you can really tell that it came from the heart. It's riddled with emotion, and that's the way I like my poems.
Write on and good luck!
| Rabid Squirrel Lover chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I can usually relate to this. Usually. Right now, not so much.
Either way, I still think it's a good poem. You can express your feelings on the paper (Computer? XD) quite well.