Very nice! I love the use of metaphor and description. I can almost feel your longing to touch the sun throughout.

Phantom Jedi

Love your poem. I especially like the line "...lazy drifting dance." The metaphor is working.

Let's go! It's hard to believe the first poems of yours I read were four years ago! They were brilliant and captivating then. In fact Blank Piece of Paper and Raindrops in the Ocean remain two of my favorite poems of all time. I'm pleased to say I still find your poetry brilliant and captivating. The imagery, especially at marbled blue and white (and the couple lines thereafter) is everything I would have expected from you. Thanks for sharing. :)